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Father of our tragedy. by ~BarbwireDoll:iconBarbwireDoll:



Born in cocaine acid rain
Stereotypical
Hypocritical
Bathed in a holy tequila mix
Corroding your complete crucifix
Now we see dignity commence.

Induced euphoria
Defying you supposed savoir.
Lost
But found
Blessed
Now drowned.

Lighting up, fucking up
It’s all the same, insane.
If Jesus and Allah sang this same song
Would that make it wrong?

Condemned Nations
Un-unite
Fighting for their dammed plight.
In god we trust
But sin they must

Omnipotent origin
Characters conviction
Differing ideals
False adhering friction.

Suburbia’s angel.
An unsigned virgin bride
With a dirty face
She’s fallen from grace
The morality of her myth.
Takes her though
Would He do it for you?

From the garden of Gethsemane…
To the garage of genocide.
We confide.
Lords Suicide.

You cremated communion
Wine and dine, take the bread
Feel the dread
Confess? Forgive?
He would.
He should.
He could

But who is he?
The Father of our tragedy?
A mere miscreated maybe...
©2004-2009 ~BarbwireDoll
:iconbarbwiredoll:

Author's Comments

Read and see...

No offence intended to anyone, okay?

Peace.

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:iconbarbwiredoll:
Ah yes..this is that piece I was telling you I coudnt write, because I was thinking about it too much...and here it is.

But its nothing like I imagined it would to be. Lol

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"I am not interested in money. I just want to be wonderful."

Marilyn Monroe
:iconavoiderdragon:
We have something in common... I can hear you saying out loud what I also have in mind in this work.

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"A child comes to me with a spark of interest. I feed the spark and it becomes a flame. I feed the flame and it becomes a fire. I feed the fire and it becomes a roaring blaze." - Cus D'Amato
:iconavoiderdragon:
BTW, I like the title VERY much... Good work, girl...

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"A child comes to me with a spark of interest. I feed the spark and it becomes a flame. I feed the flame and it becomes a fire. I feed the fire and it becomes a roaring blaze." - Cus D'Amato
:iconpersistanceofmemory:
I love it. The images you create stand out so vividly. The first verse just sets it all up. And lots of bible-ish things.... I think.

Besides. Its got an awesome beat to it. Kickass job!

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stuck on the sky's slow cinematography
:iconbarbwiredoll:
Thank You..

Bible-ish images, yea I'd hope it does...well that was the intention anyway. I just didn't know enough about other religions to put them in, so only put in the religion I am all too familiar with :P

Thanks for the fave! ;)

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"I am not interested in money. I just want to be wonderful."

Marilyn Monroe
:iconpersistanceofmemory:
No problem, definitely deserves it.

Yeah I am not sure about the bible images, as I dont know much about the bible and all that religiony stuff.
Nice job again.
Cheers!

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stuck on the sky's slow cinematography
:iconbarbwiredoll:
Cool :)

I don't like titles that much ay....i think it sorta limits and dictates what the poem can, or can't be. You need a title that commands attention, kinda shoes whats its about, but doesnt give anything away. I find when im writing the title is that last thing on my mind :)

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"I am not interested in money. I just want to be wonderful."

Marilyn Monroe
:iconpoemystery:
i dun know what to say! its soo heritical! BURN AT THE STAKE! lol i love it! redefining borders.

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my existance is a mystery
to all that surround me...
they feel my presence,
but never know who i really am
inside.

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